Sunday, December 15, 2013

Sarah Gee MC Critiques


Shalayna: B There were a few high breaks –glottal stops. Breathy release and noisy breaths.
I:  great
T: beautifully dramatic
D: enunciation ___ could be better
T:  1st a little dead pan___ so much better when you have added meaning.
M; better phrasing – less or softer glottal stops
O: (curved arrow) first time was a little lacking in energy but beautiful none the less.
Jake: B: Wow you can do a lot with those lungs. – Try not to muscle the sound out.
I: Yes –high notes a little strained.
T: you have a very powerful, pleasing voice. 
D: good
E: could show a little more
Feel full head space available…like a boa constrictor.
Jaw loose with head space.
Liz 
B: could be deeper.  the jaw is open but it is really tense and maybe extended to far back every once in a while. the torso is also tense when breathing-- ”watching the street “  jaw comes in a bit.
Intonation and timber are good.
Great enunciation, I could tell what you were saying and that you were singing in English, you are always so good with diction.

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