Jakity Spjooooteee
I noticed a
reaching with the chin for the first note, because it was high.
I felt like
the pitch was a bit under and sketchy.
I feel like that’s a placement.
So what’s
with the shaking head? That seems
not good.
I was
worried when you went for that high phrase at the end. It seemed like you were bringing all
this weight up with you.
I could
feel some real passion in the end of the middle section, cool.
I wish you
would stop closing your eyes.
Keep the
air flowing during the crescendo.
I really
liked the improvement when you thought about what you felt while singing.
I noticed that
when you crescendo, you bring more weight into the voice that causes the tone
to go under.
le sol
desir, despoir is the part I really like.
It seems like you keep a low balance in the upwards pitch. that was cool. And Cindy pointed out that is because
it was pulling your heartstrings.
“the magic
horn”
I would
recommend greater molar space in desir, the [i] vowel.
going from
“la” to “fleur” where you lost energy, I think it was due to you closing down
your space to achieve the [f]
I agree
with her sucked into yourself thing.
That applies to you fo sho.
Luke Shepherd
I love that
you perform everytime you get up there.
So appreciated.
I like the
body alignment, with the exception of your shoulders going up all the time
Great
musicality and crescendo on that “Easter time” phrase
I liked your
dramatic shift before “20 score”
You started
in a good place vocally, but it got less so as we went.
I can see
your larynx going up at the end.
I feel like
your neck was like a giraffe
I can tell
you are thinking of Belen every time you sing! It’s so honest and great.
goes to
show that using action verbs really works! Moods are boring.
Intentions are interesting.
You have to
make such clear sense of it, that the audience will get it.
Laura Berg
You don’t
start vibrato right on the beginning of the note
I like the
internal space you have. I think
it might even be too much though.
The
intention I get from you is that you are trying to convince us to buy
something. And I’m pretty sure
that’s not what you want to say.
pretty and
dark sound, I dig.
It didn’t
seem personal to you.
I liked
your low range chestiness, sounded awesome.
you don’t
have vibrato on short notes, dig into everything.
I got the
sense that this song was a choppy song, but I think that it’s supposed to be
legato line.
sometimes
it stays too dark as you ascend. I
would like more sweetness in the higher range, not hootiness.
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