Jackson Simmons
Breathing is like a bucket. Intonation needs some work on the ends of phrases; it’s like you don’t know the pitches for the ends. Diction seems very spread, especially on the [i] sounds. Timbre is brassy and bright. I see some strain in the neck, so work on keeping the back of the throat open to allow the breath to flow more freely. Expression is adorable, but I think I would like some more variation, and I would tone down the arm movements just a little because they seems a little excessive. Overall, it was very enjoyable to watch.
Bric Slade
Expression is adorable. I can really tell you now what you’re singing about. This was one of the most enjoyable performances I have watched in a while. Breathing like a little gaspy at points, like a bucket. If think if you worked on giving the breath momentum, the ends of phrases wouldn’t die off as much. Timbre is velvety and smooth. Diction is good as far as I could tell. Intonation is good. Overall, this was a really fun performance to watch, and you fought your way through that memory slip very well. :)
Brooke Myers
Breathing is engaged and bouncy. Timbre is very bright and shimmery. Diction is good, but I think your vowels could have a little more depth, so relax the jaw, just like you do on your fantastic high notes. Expression is good, but I think I’d like some more variation. Watch that you don’t wave your left hand too much while you sing--I think it’s unconscious. Overall, I thought it was a good performance--a little disjointed, but I think once you get your entrances down, you’ll be fine.
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