Emily Cottam
Good things:
- I loved the far away look in your eyes at the beginning, I really believed it.
- Your forward vowels are nice and forward.
- I liked how on one phrase, you sounded like you were musically sobbing, which was so perfect. I hope that made sense
- You are beautiful!
- When Cindy asked you to become more hopeful, it was a really good thing. REMEMBER THAT.
Things to improve
- I didn't hear your introduction at all, speak louder woman!
- I wish your [u] had less [y]
- Your darker vowels were too dark, especially [a]
Hannah Lovato
Good things
- I really liked that you gave your body freedom to move with the song, I think that helped you.
Things to improve
- The sound seems pressed to me. I feel like there is some kind of space in your head that you are not accessing, and the sound is stuck inside of you. Perhaps more molar space could help with that...
- I notice that you close down on space as you descend in pitch, which does not prepare you well for high notes.
- I wish you would open your mouth more, it seems quite stuck
- It seems like you sing in one gear (a reference to the NV)
- I see in yourself that you are predicting yourself to fail, and it hurts my heart to see that! I hear so much potential in you, don't be self-doubting!
Caitlin
Good things:
- I always enjoy your acting, it's always one of your strengths. Just very pleasant to watch.
Things to improve:
- It seemed that when you came in, you weren't ready. It took you off guard, and therefore took me off guard.
- All vowels sound the same in the high register, like "uh."
- So you have a great smile, but you lose it when you sing. However, maybe losing the smile is good until you can establish a consistently low larynx.
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