Bric Slade VRH 10/31
Sarah Brenay- The larynx seemed to be
relaxed. The are was free and flowing for the most part, but I still sensed
some swallowing of the sound in the tongue. I feel it could be more grounded in
some parts it sounds too straight tone. Perhaps speaking the text poetically
could fix a lot of the moments that are lacking. Overall I thought that she had
the right idea and with some more practice it will be golden.
Mariah Boyer- I noticed some tension in the root of the tongue. More expression is required to connect to this song. Reading text poetically to understand and speaking poetically will help the body connect. The vowels could use some defining. It got better as the piece went on. Some of the piece was a little flat, which goes back to staying connected. Reading text could potentially fix this. Also breathing lower in the body would help.
Carolee Beck- Fantastic expression. You are kind of collapsing the body and reaching with the neck a little bit. I enjoyed your style in the song. Try to let things happen rather than make things happen.
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