Bric Slade VRH 11/12/13
Tiffany Stamm
She needs to define her vowels. I noticed some sliding in and out of them. The jaw should be relaxed. You shouldn't have to move it so much as the lips when your switching vowels. I noticed there could be a bit more expression in the voice. She was bouncing her head to the rhythm which is something that she might want to watch. It doesn't make the piece any more expressive when she does this. The song could also use more line (legato technique).
Alyssa Robinson
I noticed some gaspy forced breathing. There is a tightness somewhere in the voice, my guess the tongue. The song could use more line to it, and more connection, which would come if she spoke the text poetically. Needs more vowel definition I don't feel that they have all set in.
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