Ben Shaw 11/07 VRH

1. Emily Floyd
2. Breathing: up in the shoulders.
3. Intonation: generally good. Pinching at the top of the contour causes a bit of a drop.
4. Timbre: Better balance, I think, of chiaro/oscuro. The sound is a bit thin, though, esp. in high register
5. Diction: Could use a bit more.
6. Expression: great facials, audible investment.
7. Masterclass: NA
8. Overall: good job.

1. Sarah Gee
2. Breathing: first breath was good. Following were less so.
3. Intonation: good.
4. Timbre: light, sweet voice; great sound.
5. Diction: good enough...
6. Expression: Nervousness inhibits this.
7. Masterclass: NA
8. Overall: Good. If you don't remember it, fudge it!

1. Aubrianne Dunn
2. Breathing: bucket
3. Intonation: pretty good.
4. Timbre: sweet, a bit of air. tense in upper register.
5. Diction: good.
6. Expression: needs investment. Also, musically, a sense of bounce for this song.
7. Masterclass: NA
8. Overall: good. Beware of arm/shoulder tension.