1. Amber Denslow
2. Breathing: Balloon
3. Intonation: improved with masterclass.
4. Timbre: Breathy
5. Diction: I had a hard time understanding the words.
6. Expressiveness: the dynamic element was somewhat present with regard to expression. Most likely underdeveloped due to difficulty of notes.
7. Masterclass: worked to establish a tonal center (changeable), not scooping. Good improvement.
8. Overall: Very challenging piece; good job.
1. Mariah Boyer
2. Breathing: good
3. Intonation: watch out for scooping
4. Timbre: sweet voice, tense in high register
5. Diction: Could use more clarity. This comes, I think, with more expression.
6. Expressiveness: More investment needed.
7. Masterclass: worked to make song more personally meaningful, letting the music speak, more intensity, etc. Noticeable improvement.
8. Overall: Great improvement. The song sounds much better when it means something to the performer.
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