Brad Summers-I noticed there were a couple of breaths in the shoulders during this performance. It seemed like the timbre was clear, but a little tight. That might be a result of the slightly shallow breath. I thought the intonation was good and the diction was really good. I thought he did a good job staying on his vowels. I felt in the original performance there wasn't quite enough expression, but when he applied Cindy's suggestion he made some good improvements in this area.
Sarah Gee- I thought Sarah did a good job with her breathing on this performance. The intonation was good and she had a nice bright timbre to her voice. I thought the diction was mostly good. She did have trouble remembering the words and also I thought that her 'ah' vowels were a little closed at times, but other than that good work.
Sarah Brenay- I thought the breathing in her performance was pretty good. It seemed to be pretty effortless, which is a good sign. The intonation was good, but the timbre in her voice was a little shaky at times. I think this might be a result of some slight insecurity with the text. I suspect that problem will fix itself with more practice. As far as diction is concerned I also thought she spent a little too much time on the consonants in the text.
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