Amber Denslow: Breath management seemed to have improved a little, but I think she still was fighting with her body. Timbre seemed to be whistley. I think she needs to find her happy place, and really try to stay there while performing. I struggle with this too, my body often tenses up when I'm about to perform, and it's hard for me to relax. But I think that if Amber found her happy place it would help her with breath, and expression.
Emily Cottam: Her breath wasn't terrible, but I feel like her posture could be more relaxed, it seemed as if her shoulders were shrugged, and her arms were stiff. Diction wasn't very clear, I heard that sometimes her ending consonants on the word "wood" sounded like "t". I think crisper diction might help her convey the message in a more efficient manner.
Sarah Gee: Sarah's breath management seemed to be handled very efficiently. She seemed so serene, and you could hear it in her sweet simple timbre. I thought that intonation was spot on, and I understood almost every word. The only thing I think could have been improved upon was her expression, which I think improved drastically the second time she sang. Hooray, go Sarah!
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