Caitlyn Craig:
Your
diction was good. Breathing was open in the chest and in the core.Intonation was placed well. It sounded like it was in tune. I felt for the most part you were breathing on the gesture of inhalation. Tightened up a bit when singing the high notes. Just have to loosen up and relax when you sing those notes. Trust your voice it will do its job.
Brooke Myers: Keep in mind expression is half the battle. I feel it could have been a little more expressive. Your body seemed a little stiff. I feel focusing on expression will loosen you up a for the most part. Just relax. I feel your vibrato is a little fluttery which makes me thing your tongue might be retracting. Get that thing out of the way! I do the same thing. I feel it was quite an improvement from the last time I heard you sing.
Alyssa Robinson: Breathing really low which is good but expansion in the rib cage and the back is also required. A little gaspy and forced. Practicing just speaking the text will give you a sense of the natural breathing rhythm of the piece. Diction could be improved. I wasn't sure what she was saying for the most part. The song wasn't entirely in tune. Vowels need to be darker and more tall and gothic.
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