Jakeyjakester
I think that this performance was much improved from last week, so congratulations! Maybe you could try creating a emotional/vocal color contrast between the first section and the beginning of the "maudire" section. I think Don Jose is really going from in love to a bit crazy and I'd like to see it in your eyes. I think that you are selling it in a really believable way, but not for the stage. I wanted exactly what you were giving me, but hyped up with energy. Remember to tumble over the side of a wall while singing high.
Tayleeeeee
You had such a beautiful face during the introduction, really pulled me in. I wished that you had vibrato on every note, especially in the first phrase (it was very apparent in that phrase.) I also wished that the sustained notes had a sense of tumbling off a wall, like Cindy suggested for Jake. Don't let the double consonants stop your flow of air! I noticed that double consonants interrupted your line. Reminders of what Cindy told you: Don't stop moving your body, just have it do something different!
Laura Bergyberg
I wished there had bee vibrato on every note. I told you this already, but your high placement was so pleasing to listen to! Congratulations! I see some tension in your neck, I would watch for that. That your tone explodes from the consonants instead of simply releasing from them. But good job!
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