1. Sam
2. Breathing: breathed a little high in the chest
3. intonation: note weight due to tension in throat caused occasional sagging pitch
4. Timbre: rich tone, a bit tight
5. Diction: hard to understand
6. Expressiveness: had some dynamic contrast, diction would help
7. Masterclass: attempt to establish sense of phrase, worked on shoulder tension. This will probably go better in the practice room due to nervousness.
8. Overall: prepared performance, good learning from masterclass.
1. Luke
2. Breathing: good at the start, regressed throughout the song.
3. Intonation: a bit sharp on some sustained notes
4. Timbre: warm sound, heady.
5. Diction: n's and m's could be more, voiceless consonants excellent.
6. Expressiveness: good sense of phrasing. The song itself wasn't engaging as it could have been, though.
7. Masterclass: attempt to establish aggressive engagement. This helped.
8. Overall: very well done.
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