Masterclass 9/3

Shalayna:
Did take a few high breaths. the glottal stops a little more present in this song. heard a few noisy breaths. your intonation is great except for those moments after the glottal stops causing pitch to rise.
your voice is so beautifully dramatic you can do so much with it. your enunciation could be better. Emotion wise you were pretty dead pan the first time you sang it. Everything improved so much when you added more emotion. your words became clearer and more concise. your glottal thingys that were going on did not happen very much. you had better phrasing and I could connect to the song a lot better by the end of the session.
Jake:
Wow you can really muscle out a lot of sound! Good intonation but high notes sound a little strained. you have a stentorian voice. The pencil did wonders for your high notes. It is frustrating working through those problem areas but it feels so good when you find that you have learned so much and what you've been practicing sticks with you.
Liz:
your breaths could be deeper in the body.  open your jaw a little more but don't force it down. it seemed a little tense. especially "and watching the street.." that is where the most jaw tension was. your intonation was good. you really have the most unique voices I have ever heard I love listening to it. It is very clear and full of color and life. Beautiful job. After Cindy worked with you on posture you  sound much better. Much more free.